tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post3328416634574268585..comments2015-07-24T18:33:15.132-07:00Comments on A Girl: Chapter twoannasommerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01284760884033582358noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-24323252960364463562014-02-20T08:53:17.376-08:002014-02-20T08:53:17.376-08:00Anna, my darling! I simply love this so far! I c...Anna, my darling! I simply love this so far! I can't wait to see what happens. Luckily, I'm behind, and chapter 3 is up! Off to read! Bee_Causehttp://bee0cause0stories.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-57437704673879640162014-01-13T07:33:52.331-08:002014-01-13T07:33:52.331-08:00Hi , Anna. Good to read you again. This seems to b...Hi , Anna. Good to read you again. This seems to be a nice story you're creating. <i'll be following you. I'm also writing a story but it's the previous part to one I started a year ago. I'll leave you the link just in case you want check it. i'ts in Spanish, but you can use the translator. <br />http://www.lumyquint.com/2013/11/mis-historias-de-sims-3-Mi-diario-Lumy-con-sentimientos.html<br />http://www.lumyquint.com/2013/11/historias-de-los-sims-3-Mi-diario-Lumy-con-Sentimientos.html<br />http://www.lumyquint.com/2013/12/mi-diario-capitulo-ii-en-el-circo-lumy-con-sentimientos.html<br />http://www.lumyquint.com/2014/01/mi-diario-capitulo-iii-la-vuelta-casa-Lumy-con-sentimientos.html<br />I'd love to hear your opinion. <br />I've read your three chapters and Im full of curiosity about the two main characters. <br />It's a pretty nice work. <br />greetings, Lumysims2000Lumy Quinthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09972377930343361610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-85317784347041161992013-11-05T11:55:17.235-08:002013-11-05T11:55:17.235-08:00Hi Marsar :D Right now I am trying very hard not t...Hi Marsar :D Right now I am trying very hard not to return to my usual style of writing- thanks for encouraging me in that *lol*<br /><br />Mmmmmh my fingers are itching to start the next chapter now but once again, I need some sets and characters first ^^ annasommerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01284760884033582358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-12202273964445905372013-11-04T13:01:51.888-08:002013-11-04T13:01:51.888-08:00Wow, that last sentence sent shivers down my spine...Wow, that last sentence sent shivers down my spine. And it has kept me wondering... Okay, so I think I believe in the kindness of SOME strangers: hopefully for the girl, that man falls into that category...<br /><br />I loved how you used the narrator's perspective to portray all the tension that was going on, it was quite powerful :-).Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-91659957563927732013-11-04T09:07:17.515-08:002013-11-04T09:07:17.515-08:00Hey LateKnight :)
Ah, you may be right, you may be...Hey LateKnight :)<br />Ah, you may be right, you may be wrong... what if he was trying to make her leave because he knew it would be worse for her to stay? Thanks for commenting... ^^<br />annasommerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01284760884033582358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6934099914633223904.post-14875575429172192542013-11-04T08:38:46.109-08:002013-11-04T08:38:46.109-08:00Nice job with the colors you picked for the bum...Nice job with the colors you picked for the bum's house, LOL, looks very realistic. Hmm considering the bum was trying to get the girl to go away after those two left, I don't think he's going to do anything wierd... =DLateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.com